Ecxcellent work!
I enjoyed it all; it's clear you put a lot of work into it. I would put more work into your art, unless you want to keep the jaggedy look for a stylistic thing.
It was ood work all around, and the song was cool.
I didn't even watch it all, but I will come back to finish it for sure!
lol
RB
its just my style i guess
thanks for reviewing
You know how surprised I am!?
Not because of what happend, but because I couldn't see it coming!
I bet you're wondering which kinda coming I mean? HAHAHAH! NO.
Nice work. Keep improving your art and animation man. No need to improve your funny! ;)
5/5
RB
Haha I hear yah Omegared!XD Thanks, I'll definitely take your advice, and have A Great day.
I'm gonna have to steal this one!
I mean it will gain me instant popularity because it's AWESOME!
Did you steal that shoop da whoop? How can I?
LOL
This is going right to my favs!
5/5
RB
PS I just want to make it clear I am only joking.
lol, thanks
So that's it huh!
This is the reason people make spam flashes! You have explained it clearly with your flash here. The creator of a spam flash is trying to make my head explode.
HEY!? Can you make a directors cut where his dick explodes??? Wouldn't that be funny? No? Okay. ... Well I was just saying.
Anyway this was cute, short, to the point- spam is always made by "somefag" and it makes our heads explode.
3/5
RB
pwn
I gave this a 5 I think.
It was about an hour ago, and I really don't remember but, WOW! I can't believe this! Am I seeing things right?
Does GUNSHOP HAVE A HIGHER SCORE THAN THIS??? HAHAH!
Oh man I'm sorry! No it's not you, I voted zero for gun shop!
lol I'm sorry this has nothing to do with this flash at all so if NG folk need whistle points come and get it, BUT WOW NG FOLK ARE SUPER RETARDED SOMETIMES!
"HEY DUDE IT LOOKS LIKE A REAL GUN!!! OMFG! VOTE 5! VOTE 5!!! SMAHS BROS OH A JOKE I HATE IT!!! WAAAH!
lol
Your flash work is great! I admit I was a little upset by the ending, ad I didn't know what to do. I almost just cried.. HEh then I voted 5. I think. There's nothing wrong with this flash except for the luigi ending. ;)
But that's a joke too, I guess it just went over my head. Like (I'm sure) my joke above in this review!
anyway I decided to review this after I saw the low score. I guess it's true what Star Syndicate said "People may not always love jokes, but the always hate it when the jokes on them."
5/5 for imation and skills
RB
you're the best
Better luck next time.
It's always hard for me as a reviewing NG person to review these types of submissions because I know you probably put a lot of work into this and wanted it to be in the collaboration really bad.
It wasn't that funny it needs to be funnier or more action packed. You'll get funnier the more you practice. Trust me; everyone that cares to get better does get better!
The art and animation are good. I think if you would have had a better joke than just the kid killing Snake then you would have made it in.
I saw this coming a mile away. Right when the screen blacked out I knew solid snake was gonna be shot.
Maybe if you would have had the gun shot and then just shown him butt humping the teacher of the school instead it would have been funny.
(I'm just saying. It makes me laugh.)
Take it with a grain of salt!
Also why is solid snake in the school? What does he want from the kid? Is he trying to cheat on a test or something? No, because this kid is just drawing; and why does this kid draw tank man stuff? Is solid snake trying to stop him from drawing a new design of Metal gear? Metal Gear Tank?
These questions aren't clearly answered in the flash which is a part of your story telling skills.
Don't worry you will get better!
You have skill in art and animation now just work on your comedy and synopsis.
2/5
RB
PS I didn't think all the entries in the MGSC disc 1 or 2 were funny either. So, please don't get discouraged.
He wan't a kid , he was Jeff (aka JohnnyUtah , creator of Tankmen ) . I specified this in the author comments and there was a sign in the wall sayig Jeff's Office. But thanks anyway for your review
WOW! PRETTY GREAT!
LOL I want to say that it would have been funny if when the first dude in the crowd that pointed toward something wasn't actually pointing to the rocket but to like a sign that had a sale for hotdogs, and then the hotdog cart guy pointed to the rocket that would have been hilarious!!
Anyway, this was a great flash! Really great! With great music! It looked like a lot of hard work went into it, but where did the sound go at the end? That's my only real problem with it. Otherwise 5 stars man!
Anyway nice job! Really!
4/5
RB
I don't know man. the music stops just when the screen turns black. in my pc it feets perfectly. it just some people's computer. thanks a lot :) . but.. why hot dogs? XD LOL
Did you realizewhen you made this
That it's incredibly sad? I mean horribly. I mean I wish I had never watched it. I mean lots and lots of horrible sadness is cooked up in my mind for that dude.
You probably didn't, and I am only going to assume that because of your authors comments.
It's very good work.
Sad, but that's the point of making a flash to move an audience in a certain direction. You really made me hate this world, mostly cause I hate to see others pain, and you drew everything so well and animated it well and told a very horribly sad story. Well, just a snipet really, I'll never know how dude got so messed up.
I won't add this to my favorites because it makes me to sad. It's good enough to be there though.
5/5
PS The only thing that may be sadder than this flash might be the fact that you probably don't realize how good it really is.
PPS I'll have to check out your other work now!
PPPS I'm not a homo!
this world really is a terrible place but we must do what we can :)
no, i didnt realize it was incredibly sad. i didnt think people would take this seriously at all. they sure showed me! almost a year later and i still cant believe some of the reviews people left. who the hell is going to cry over a web cartoon
no, dont check out my other work, its terrible D:
one of the best flashes I have seen in a while
I think people below me that eview this poorly just don't like DBZ much.
Lets get one thing straight right now though! IF LUIGI EVER WAS TO FIGHT IN A DBZ LIKE WORLD HE WOULD OWWWWN EVERYBODY!
I can't agree with this ending, it's not accurate, but that's what NG is for right.
LUIGI OWNS!!!! Play me at brawl and I will show you! PM me if you want my online friend I.D. My Luigi spanks!
That being said I like your flash a lot.
It's bad ass, I can see the hard work you put into, and you didn't over use any stupid Mario vocie files like the WHAO! and the YAHOO! You used a lot of DBZ sounds though, but it didn't hinder the flash.
5/5
LOL, srry I killed off the legendary green menace.
Maybe I'll give Luigi a better role next time.
Anyway thanks for the info.
The credits music CKY is the best!
Oh and the flash was okay too. I guess.
;)
Nice job it was pretty gook work from everybody and the jokes made me smile, a couple I chuckeld out loud. So COL I guess?
COL dudes good work! Especially for an hours work.
Oh one thing though!! I was expecting the Pac Man flash to have two parts, the first one being the one that is in theflash, and Iw as hoping that there would be a second part woith the ghosts chasing Pac Man! COL just something I thought would have been cool to see.
4/5
RB
Thanks for the review, CKY rocks.
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