It's a good animation. I really like the art.
I really like your style of art work and your skill as an animator.
I hardly found this to be funny. I didn't laugh hard once. Next time maybe make the story a little more origional than just two people have a regular conversation with lots of cus words.
Nothing was surprising in this flash at all, and a key part of comedy is the element of surprise/timing. When a joke is made it's nice to know that the punch line wasn't predictable, this flash didn't even has a set up to a punch line or any form of comedy like that. It's more like a constant set up to nothing.
The main joke throughout this flash seemed to be a guy was a upset because he couldn't play his video game, then he wanted to eat bigger pancakes, which didn't make sense (and was supposed to be funny) because it's silly when he could get full by eating all the little ones.
Oh and the waitress was shocked. I liked the tip of the coffee part. Just because.
Your flash is highly overratted, but I congradulate you for it being that way because that must mean that your rep preceeds you. I mean it hasto, if this was submitted by any average Joe who didn't make a "NG famous" Zelda flash last year -AHEM YOU- then it would be another lost flash. A Rhinestone in a sea of gems.
Enjoy your space on the top 1. -sigh-
3/5
RB
PS sorry for being such an asshole!